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Re: I've Fallen For You
Hello! I really like this poem and its message, particularly the end. At first I wasn't sure about the rhyming because it sounds a little too happy for the beginning ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Reviews: How long do you spend?
About ten or fifteen minutes. I only really review poetry, and I'm not one for writing lengthy reviews, so I tend to be able to say everything important I want ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: How do you review?
I was just thinking about reviewing, and wondering, how does everyone go about it? Do you review line-by-line, or comment on the overall piece and then point out things you ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: The Just Finished Writing a Book Thread
Well done Vernon! How long did it take, and how long is it? I've finished the second draft of my novel now; it's about 58,000 words and it's taken me ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: What's the deal with F.R.E.D.?
:o: I can see F.R.E.D.'s innards!
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Is the hardcover novel dead?
Hmm, well I still prefer to buy CDs over downloading MP3s so I doubt I'll be buying a Kindle any time soon. I like the authenticity of books, I like ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Music Of War!
Hey! Just a quick note, I edited the caps out of your title. :) I like the rhythm you make in this song. I can hear it, it kind of ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: YWS Trading Cards :D
Owls Mowing Grass, awesome!!
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Poem That Got Me a Date to Homecoming
Aww, this is very cute! I love the rhyming scheme - I love how you go AA,BB and then the last line doesn't rhyme with anything at all. For some ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: James, for Anne
Hi! Well, when you preface your poem by telling people they probably won't understand it, it doesn't really fill me with confidence. :P At best it means you don't expect ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Joy Production
Hey! I think this poem is very interesting and I like the concept a lot. It flows quite well and the rhyming is good, if a little predictable in places. ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: In the Window Sill
Hi! I think your poem starts out with a lot of promise. I love how you describe the night in the first stanza. Beautiful! However, I don't really get the ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: New: Member Only Topics
Cool. :)
Sep 20, 2010 -
Re: Newb ;)
Welcome to YWS! Advice for writing fiction? Well, poetry's more my thing, but I'd say that what we do here helps people greatly with their writing, because when we review ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Newbie questions
Oh, I see what you mean! Yeah, it does that. You just have to look through that forum to see which posts have been replied to - those are the ...
Sep 17, 2010
