Matt Bellamy

I think that if the dream is interesting enough to hold the reader's attention for three pages, then you can make it three pages. If the reader is sat there ...

Hello! I really like this poem and its message, particularly the end. At first I wasn't sure about the rhyming because it sounds a little too happy for the beginning ...

About ten or fifteen minutes. I only really review poetry, and I'm not one for writing lengthy reviews, so I tend to be able to say everything important I want ...

I was just thinking about reviewing, and wondering, how does everyone go about it? Do you review line-by-line, or comment on the overall piece and then point out things you ...

Well done Vernon! How long did it take, and how long is it? I've finished the second draft of my novel now; it's about 58,000 words and it's taken me ...

:o: I can see F.R.E.D.'s innards!

Hmm, well I still prefer to buy CDs over downloading MP3s so I doubt I'll be buying a Kindle any time soon. I like the authenticity of books, I like ...

Hey! Just a quick note, I edited the caps out of your title. :) I like the rhythm you make in this song. I can hear it, it kind of ...

Owls Mowing Grass, awesome!!

Aww, this is very cute! I love the rhyming scheme - I love how you go AA,BB and then the last line doesn't rhyme with anything at all. For some ...

Hi! Well, when you preface your poem by telling people they probably won't understand it, it doesn't really fill me with confidence. :P At best it means you don't expect ...

Hey! I think this poem is very interesting and I like the concept a lot. It flows quite well and the rhyming is good, if a little predictable in places. ...

Hi! I think your poem starts out with a lot of promise. I love how you describe the night in the first stanza. Beautiful! However, I don't really get the ...

Cool. :)

Welcome to YWS! Advice for writing fiction? Well, poetry's more my thing, but I'd say that what we do here helps people greatly with their writing, because when we review ...